From 8ae26b832f997b394053597af1effa6bee498048 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hwdsl2 Date: Sun, 25 Sep 2022 14:33:51 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Update docs --- README-zh.md | 4 ++-- README.md | 4 ++-- docs/ikev2-howto-zh.md | 4 ++-- docs/ikev2-howto.md | 4 ++-- 4 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/README-zh.md b/README-zh.md index d123341..d97e152 100644 --- a/README-zh.md +++ b/README-zh.md @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ IPsec VPN 可以加密你的网络流量，以防止在通过因特网传送时 ## 快速开始 -首先，在你的 Linux 服务器\* 上全新安装 Ubuntu, Debian 或者 CentOS。 +首先，在你的 Linux 服务器\* 上安装 Ubuntu, Debian 或者 CentOS。 使用以下命令快速搭建 IPsec VPN 服务器： @@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ https://gitlab.com/hwdsl2/setup-ipsec-vpn/-/raw/master/vpnsetup.sh ## 系统要求 -一个云服务器，虚拟专用服务器 (VPS) 或者专用服务器，全新安装以下操作系统之一： +一个云服务器，虚拟专用服务器 (VPS) 或者专用服务器，安装以下操作系统之一： - Ubuntu 22.04, 20.04 或者 18.04 - Debian 11 或者 10 diff --git a/README.md b/README.md index 0d58c97..06a0c84 100644 --- a/README.md +++ b/README.md @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ We will use [Libreswan](https://libreswan.org/) as the IPsec server, and [xl2tpd ## Quick start -First, prepare your Linux server\* with a fresh install of Ubuntu, Debian or CentOS. +First, prepare your Linux server\* with an install of Ubuntu, Debian or CentOS. Use this one-liner to set up an IPsec VPN server: @@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ A pre-built [Docker image](https://github.com/hwdsl2/docker-ipsec-vpn-server) is ## Requirements -A cloud server, virtual private server (VPS) or dedicated server, freshly installed with: +A cloud server, virtual private server (VPS) or dedicated server, with an install of: - Ubuntu 22.04, 20.04 or 18.04 - Debian 11 or 10 diff --git a/docs/ikev2-howto-zh.md b/docs/ikev2-howto-zh.md index 7c4534e..5b75570 100644 --- a/docs/ikev2-howto-zh.md +++ b/docs/ikev2-howto-zh.md @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ Libreswan 支持通过使用 RSA 签名算法的 X.509 Machine Certificates 来 #### 自动导入配置 -[**屏幕录影：** 自动导入 IKEv2 配置（支持者）](https://ko-fi.com/post/IKEv2-Auto-Import-Configuration-on-Windows-8-10-a-K3K1DQCHW) +[**屏幕录影：** 在 Windows 上自动导入 IKEv2 配置](https://ko-fi.com/post/IKEv2-Auto-Import-Configuration-on-Windows-8-10-a-K3K1DQCHW) **Windows 8, 10 和 11** 用户可以自动导入 IKEv2 配置： @@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ Libreswan 支持通过使用 RSA 签名算法的 X.509 Machine Certificates 来 #### 手动导入配置 -[**屏幕录影：** 手动导入 IKEv2 配置（支持者）](https://ko-fi.com/post/Video-IKEv2-Manually-Import-Configuration-H2H1DS8SV) +[**屏幕录影：** 在 Windows 上手动导入 IKEv2 配置（支持者）](https://ko-fi.com/post/Video-IKEv2-Manually-Import-Configuration-H2H1DS8SV) 或者，**Windows 7, 8, 10 和 11** 用户可以手动导入 IKEv2 配置： diff --git a/docs/ikev2-howto.md b/docs/ikev2-howto.md index bf8e43f..99f2a03 100644 --- a/docs/ikev2-howto.md +++ b/docs/ikev2-howto.md @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ In certain circumstances, you may need to change the IKEv2 server address. For e #### Auto-import configuration -[**Screencast:** IKEv2 Auto Import Configuration (supporters)](https://ko-fi.com/post/IKEv2-Auto-Import-Configuration-on-Windows-8-10-a-K3K1DQCHW) +[**Screencast:** IKEv2 Auto Import Configuration on Windows](https://ko-fi.com/post/IKEv2-Auto-Import-Configuration-on-Windows-8-10-a-K3K1DQCHW) **Windows 8, 10 and 11** users can automatically import IKEv2 configuration: @@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ If you get an error when trying to connect, see [Troubleshooting](#troubleshooti #### Manually import configuration -[**Screencast:** IKEv2 Manually Import Configuration (supporters)](https://ko-fi.com/post/Video-IKEv2-Manually-Import-Configuration-H2H1DS8SV) +[**Screencast:** IKEv2 Manually Import Configuration on Windows (supporters)](https://ko-fi.com/post/Video-IKEv2-Manually-Import-Configuration-H2H1DS8SV) Alternatively, **Windows 7, 8, 10 and 11** users can manually import IKEv2 configuration: