From d775e5ceb0d898022810ccc39c718feb5864d774 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Travis Swientek <travis@tswientek.com>
Date: Thu, 25 Jul 2013 00:16:49 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] "Updated README"

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 README.md | 20 +++++++++++++-------
 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index 2796d8f..47840be 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 Mailgun-PHP-SDK
 ===========
-This is the Mailgun PHP SDK. This SDK contains methods for easily interacting with the Mailgun API. Below are examples for utilizing the SDK!
+This is the Mailgun PHP SDK. This SDK contains methods for easily interacting with the Mailgun API. Below are examples to get you started.
 
 Installation
 -----
-To install the SDK, you need to be using Composer in your project. If you aren't using Composer yet, it's really simple! Here's how to install composer and the Mailgun SDK.
+To install the SDK, you will need to be using Composer in your project. If you aren't using Composer yet, it's really simple! Here's how to install composer and the Mailgun SDK.
 
 ```PHP
 # Install Composer
@@ -13,14 +13,14 @@ curl -sS https://getcomposer.org/installer | php
 # Add Mailgun as a dependency
 php composer.phar require mailgun/mailgun-php-sdk:~1.0
 ``` 
-Next, require Composer's autoloader to automatically load the Mailgun SDK:
+Next, require Composer's autoloader to automatically load the Mailgun SDK in your project:
 ```PHP
 require 'vendor/autoload.php';
 ```
 
 Usage
 -----
-Using the SDK is rather simple, if you're already familiar with our API. If not, no problem... Just know that the classes follow the API endpoints. So when you're reviewing our documentation, the endpoints are expressed as a class. 
+Using the SDK should feel simple, if you're already familiar with our API endpoints. If not, no problem... When you're reviewing our documentation, the endpoints are expressed as a class in the SDK to make things easier. 
 
 Here's an example for sending a message: 
 
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ $message->sendMessage();
 
 Advanced Usage
 --------------
-You've sent your first message, awesome! Let's move on to more advanced scenarios. 
+You've sent your first message, awesome! Let's move on to more advanced use cases. 
 
 #### Message Builder
 Message Builder makes creating your messages really intuitive. If you despise arrays, or your workflow is better off defining each part of the MIME separately, use this!
@@ -66,20 +66,26 @@ $message->setSubject("A message from the PHP SDK using Message Builder!");
 # Define the body of the message.
 $message->setTextBody("This is the text body of the message!");
 
+# Other Optional Parameters.
+$message->addCampaignId("My-Awesome-Campaign");
+$message->addCustomHeader("Customer-Id", "12345");
+$message->addAttachment("@/tron.jpg");
+$message->setDeliveryTime("tomorrow 8:00AM", "PST");
+$message->setClickTracking(true);
+
 # Finally, send the message.
 $message->sendMessage();
 
 ```
 
 #### Batch Sending
-Batch sending allows you to submit up to 1,000 messages per API call. This is the best way to send a large amount of messages as quickly as possible. In the example below, we'll use the MessageBuilder object to create a message.
+Batch sending allows you to submit up to 1,000 messages per API call. This is the best way to send a large amount of messages as quickly as possible. In the example below, we'll use the Message Builder object to create a message. While Message Builder is the preferred method, you can also run "setMessage()" and pass a fully formed array of data.
 
 ```php
 # First, instantiate the client with your API credentials and domain. 
 $mgClient = new MailgunClient("key-3ax6xnjp29jd6fds4gc373sgvjxteol0", "samples.mailgun.org");
 
 # Next, instantiate a Batch Message object on the Messages API endpoint. 
-# (note: The Batch Message object automatically includes a Message Builder object)
 $batchMessage = $mgClient->Messages()->BatchMessage();
 
 # Define the from address.